My grief my new poem

[*صدى الجبال*]

Peace be upon you

Enjoy reading this poem which I wrote yesterday


My grief

Life is becoming a grave

That's treating me as a slave

Chained in the darkness of that cave

with no power to speak or even to wave

I'm no more free no more alive

Nor can I ask for help neither been save

waiting for the clock to strike five


In that moment I wish I could wake

From a nightmare that made me shake

Covered with sweat as if I was inside a lake

A lake which I wish I could break



It Into pieces of stone

To free poeple and feel I'm not alone

Fighting sorrows ;crying on my own

Waiting just for a call of a phone

A soft voice repeating a noun

Which gonna make me smile and not goan

Pushes me to look up and not down



I cry I shout so loud

My GOD give me a faith's sword

To fight that nagging sound

Inside my head which is saying one word

LIVE IN GRIEF.LIVE IN GRIEF

[رومانسية]

HELLO


Glad to be the first one who comments

your poem is so soft and wonderful

you are very good in picturing your feelings


I'll add my poem also

we are competing

[BrOkEn EmO]

i have nothing to say except
WOW

[*صدى الجبال*]

Lol roro thanks so much for the sweet reply

I'm happy to hear that but don't put me in a competition I won't win against you I'm sure

Mirfet thanks so much and welcome

[seabreeze]

hiiiii sada
how r u
your poem is nice & sad & wonderfull & full of pessimism
great darling
keep going

[رومانسية]

oh my dear
you could, why not
the competetion between friends is great
it keeps you going on
:)

[*صدى الجبال*]

Seabreeze welcome sister

thanks so much for the nice comment

may God bless you

Roro I don't like cometition lol COZ It makes me under pressure

Keep it up waiting for your new poem

[ihateu]

it's good to write like this nice words thanks a lot :)

[*صدى الجبال*]

peace be upon you

thanks brother for the nice passage